Angel Jimenez Biography
One
person who has it as a referent, its my grandfather, called Angel who
was born in July of 1933, in Granada. He lived a large part of his
life there, when he finished the high school, he came to Barcelona to
work. Here he met my grandmother, finally theu get married and they
had two children, my mother Lidia and my uncle Angel too, nowadays
they live in Arenys de Mar.
Hello Marc, I've read your composition and I liked read it but I’ve found some mistakes that you could improve in your next composition.
ResponEliminaVisually I can see that one part of the composition is missing, I think is the conclusion. Grammatically talking, instead writing “has it as a referent” you should write “has been a referent”. Also, after the coma you have to write “is” in place of “its”. In the following line, you are talking about his past, so you must write all the verbs in past, you wrote “get married” and “decide”, and it should be “got married” and “decided”.
Pol